This is great! I don't think it looks unfinished at all- I like the use of white space and the fade in from blue. @juliakponsford is more educated on art than I am though and might have a different opinion.
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Thanks for your kind words! Although I didn't use any blue in this - where do you see it? :D
Must have been my computer! Now that I look at it on my phone I don't see it- sorry about that!
No worries! Thanks for commenting. It means a lot :)