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RE: Being an Artist in Israeli Army #10

in #art7 years ago

Your skills with line are actually quite decent, did you use any reference material or is this composed from imagination? I like the skull textures and your attempt at guiding the eye through page. The opening at the top is a great way to relax the eyes and let them out, very nice. Your depth of space is pretty good too, nice overlapping of the bird over the skull and tree. I'd like too see some atmosphere, the air in the background. Also the composition is nice however, if you pulled the skull up a hair and to the left it would be just about perfect. Overall, good penmanship. I'd like to see the final if you plan on finishing.

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Thank you for both the criticism and the compliments, there are definitely things here that I can take on.
And for the drawing - all of the objects were taken from different images on the Internet, but the composition itself is from my imagination.

Spoken like a true artist! I have followed you to see what you do with it and drawings yet to come. Keep it up, if your desire is strong you can become extremely talented.

Thanks, I will do my best :)