Everything is all good :D Pencils (and watercolours and the inks you throw around with brushes) do have this delicate feel that's harder to get with the stronger inks though :) Love the hair shading in particular here :D
The kneaded eraser swirls in the background were a good idea too :)

oh boy i forgot about watercolor again.... XD
thank you, ryry <3 <3 <3 <3 <3