Interesting that it's "perfectly beautiful" in the picture and "perfectly polished" in your text.
Did you take that picture? It's awesome!
And the poem really makes me think about the beauty we've created, the essence of why we've evolved toward a concrete jungle and why we thrive in here, and criticise it at the same time. It would be cool to take apart our reality and see what we like and what we don't.
:)
I did take it. It’s along my daily commute and whenever it’s covered by fog inspires me to write. I’ll be moving and leaving it soon, so hoping to capture its essence and remember how this fabricated jungle inspired me to write, in spite of the grit, the chaos and the constant incongruity.
And yea the writing is in progress so I edit and adapt it constantly. Always welcome feedback on what works and what doesn’t ! You’ll see there are more than a few changes between the photo and the post write up. :)
What city is this, by the way? NY?
Yea:) in Tribeca neighborhood which is the southern part of Manhattan.
Oh wow, I thought Manhattan was a city. Turns out it's part of NY! It's very popular in movies!
Very very!:)