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RE: The Night Life That Makes My Heart Longing And Keep Trying

in #artzone7 years ago

Nice poem! I liked this bit the most: Not once, I tried hard, But I was no more" and this "Slalu steadfast through" i didn't understand. What's a 'slalu'? Can you eat that? :D

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yes sorry write wrong, it means not "slalu" but "always" @madevi

grin Maybe you should edit that? :D