You are viewing a single comment's thread from:

RE: Voice Of The Lost Son - Part 1 Re edited

in #bigwaves7 years ago


Love these lines, my brother...@mistikili, you are good in your article, and I'm everything your hands findeth doing.

Growing up there was a lot of television
Booty here drugs there, it was a lot of a confusion.

Especially, when a child finds hisbor herself in a place that's not well civilized. Mostly ghetto..

And the second line, is

Mummy and daddy where is your attention
This is overwhelming, i'm at a cross junction
I have to pick now, it is the only condition
Somebody help me, what is my solution?

Parents have a large role to play, in their childrens life, as its said, "The Goodness of a child is developed by the parents".

For the touts out there I don't blame them, the main source of there problems should be reviewed.

A beautiful article and poetry @mistikili

Sort:  

You interpret my poetry like youre in my mind, please sir how do you do that?

I had a grandma, who was a teacher. She taught me the basics of understanding ones content even before reaching the end of the lines.

And this am telling you bro @mistakili

"Meanings and answers to the hardest questions and articles, are sometimes found in between the lines and sometimes when reading is done twice"

But, these can only be achieved when patient is aplied when reading an article or a post".

Even if the answers are not in between, going through the articles, you will definitely have answer or a comment to contribute..

And that's what I have applied to all the articles, poems that I do come across @mistakili