Welcome to Steemit.
A few points of advice.
Longer posts are more lucrative than short posts. If you make a post of 20-30 paragraphs, it's more likely to earn rewards.
Include some photos, images or graphs, to complement the text.
Do not write in all caps. That's like screaming online.
Best of luck. Full Steem Ahead.
I agree. I can feel the energy from this post haha, but it would be nice to see pictures and more structure in the paragraphs