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RE: We humans are very much jealous of others' success

in #blog7 years ago

Hi, I must say your writing skill needs improving. Actually I truly spent over 20 minutes to try to understand what it is you are trying to say.
If you want to succeed in this platform as a writer please take my advice.
I feel your sentences need to be short. Try to convey one idea with one sentence. This is in no way meant to criticize you. Accept this advice as a gesture of Love.
Your face shows great promise and hope. Keep trying and do not give up writing.
I want to come back to this article later again and try to understand actually what you truly want to convey to your readers.
Cheers!!