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I feel your sentences have to be compelled to be short. try and convey one plan with one sentence. this can be in no approach meant to criticize you. settle for this recommendation as a gesture of affection.
Your face shows nice promise and hope. Keep attempting and don't quit writing.
I need to return back to the present article later once more and take a look at to grasp really what you really want to convey to your readers.
Cheers!!
Hi, I see that you have copied my comment and commented here.
This is hilarious and unbelievable.
Anyway I do not understand what you wish to accomplish by doing this.
All I wanted was to help the author of this article to improve his writing and to point him in the correct direction.
I wish you did copy and paste my comment (or for that matter anyone else's comment) because my advice to the author of this post was in my honest opinion intended to make him write better and improve. Also it took me over 30 minutes of my valuable time to formulate the comment.
I wish steemit will take action against this kind of behavior.
Please do not repeat this in the future.