I think that you need to ask yourself first who is the target audience. People who are somewhat familiar with crypto probably need more specific info like block times, consensus algorithim, etc. If the target are businesses you need to highlight what advantages it has for their needs. I think the slide focuses too much on the rewards side.
Thanks for the feedback! I was out of pocket with some family activities yesterday and after I posted on Monday, so I'll have to hold off and make some revisions to it before next week.