My Ideas on a Book - tell me what you think ; )

Here are some bits and snips on a book I was going to create but stopped because of school : please forgive me if this sounds childish or if I have bad grammar and spelling, I'm only a kid (did this during summer break before 9th grade) ; ) (some parts are just notes) No pictures because there just isn't : (

plzz give me some credit (and my friend from middle school) if you use some concepts from this. Thanks and enjoy!

Prologue: How it all Happened

For billions of years, scientists knew that one day the Sun would turn into a supernova and wipe out all life on earth. One day, a team of scientists was formed and they spent their time secretly researching and discussing what would happen if the Sun exploded and how they would protect the Earth from it. They made blueprints of machines that would take on the impact of the Sun’s explosion and things that would absorb the Sun’s radiation. However all the inventions created by the group of scientists were illegal and it was necessary to get the government's approval. Finally after finishing the first models of their Earth saving inventions a few scientists from the group decided to go to the government for approval and funding for supplies. Unfortunately, the government was corrupt and instead of helping the scientists they decided to fine them and send them to jail for more money. Luckily the inventions and work was burried away and for generations lay untouched.

3,678,904 years later

After thousands of millenniums later, the government desperately needed the help of the scientists. The current generation of scientists found their ancestors blueprints and began to work. Since, technology was very advanced. Construction of these devices that spanned the world was finished in a couple of weeks. Just a few months before the estimated day the sun would explode.

When the time came, when the sun exploded, when the devices were activated. Something unexpected happened. Invisible rays penetrated the defenses of the devices and continued to go on until they hit organisms, that included humans. When the rays hit organisms besides humans, the organisms became flaming, destructive mutants that still retained the form of species that they originally were. These mutants were called pyrons. However, when the rays hit humans, some died or suffered from fatal but rare illnesses, some weren’t affected at all, but there were people who gained special abilities that can not be predicted and not much is known about them. These new evolved form of people were called genoriums. The genoriums however couldn’t use their powers all the time. They channel a certain power called genorisis, which is found in every cell in their body. Genorisis could run out but be recovered over time. The genoriums fight against the evil or used their powers for personal gain.

Chapter 1: Calix

As Calix walked down the school fields, people were looking and pointing at him, some smirked at him. “Hey”, said a buff looking person,”we got some fresh meat.” What else did he expect as a transfer student to the most prodigious training school of all (Name of country or something). Coming from the west he was one of the few survivors of the former west safe zone now nothing but ash. The pyrons destroyed his entire city only those civilians who escaped into the wilderness managed to stay safe. His father mentioned something about his family having a special gift and special talents but all he got from his father was an old flintlock . His father said it's to protect him but how could such an ancient weapon protecthim against vicious pyrons such as valarocks and flameros besides his father didn't even give him ammo! A red headed kid came running over to him with a huge mischievous yet friendly grin on his face. I rose my hands instinctively to protect me from harm. “Hello new comer!” yelled the red headed kid as he fell over trying to stop without much success for his legs just wouldn't stop moving. The red haired kid introduced himself as jittery John. I learned later that he was a new student as well. As he introduced himself, I could already tell that he was double jointed on the left thumb, he had a .27 centimeter overbite, his nose holes were exactly half a centimeter apart, his arms were a meter and 5 centimeters each, his belly button was about .78 centimeters deep, and his crotch is exactly “WOAHHHHH hold it right there!” I told my brain as all this useless information flooded into my mind. One really bad thing about being a Grenovich is you get the family gift of knowing. Something I only began to understand after my father's death. John was looking at me kinda strangely as though he knew what I was thinking and I quickly tried to put on a poker face. “Hi, my name is Calix” I introduced myself. John made a face as though he's laying an egg and then said “Hi, my name is Calix,” in a very weird, deep replica of my voice. And he burst out laughing. “Why so serious bro? Its not like we will die here, infact they're here to protect us.” I was about to ask who's they, when John pointed at the giant humanoid creatures in armor equipped with giant energy guns. “The helpers.” One thing I clearly remember my father saying is don't trust the government and the helpers were clearly a government troop. The memory clearly must have shown on my face for one of the helpers roamed towards me. My hand shot towards the handle of the old flintlock that was sticking out of my pocket. As the helper approached me I started to realize what kind of a being a helper is. So much for Humanoids that are Evolved and Liable Protectors which are Efficient, Resourceful and Successful. They had a crazy height of 10 feet which is around two Johns. It had two enormous arms with a diameter of 1 foot and each arm loaded with rocket launcher and an energy Gatling gun. It's outside was completely created out of pyranium which is orange space junk that was recreated and empowered by the sun, an armor powerful enough to block all sorts of modern day bullets. On its back was a 7 foot sword which probably was made out of pyranium as well. The helper must have noticed the fear in my eyes for it spoke in a metallic non human voice “It's okay you're safe with us.” I doubted that but I had no choice but to be herded in with other students into the giant building they called combat school.

CALIX

At first I set my mind to hate the school because everything that had to do with the government was highly disliked by my father when he still lived but I couldn't help noticing how awesome it was. I was walking next to John who was giving random facts about the school which I already knew due to my weird ability and I wasn't ready to share it with him. John took my hand and led me to the schedule blackboard, correction he grabbed my hand and charged towards the blackboard at full speed pushing people out of the way. John was only five feet tall but he acted as though he was the boss of the school. As we came closer to the black oars with the assigned classes, John changed paths and went to the left. Surprisingly their was no students in this section of the school. “Where are you taking me?!” “To professor clampof to see are you special or regular.” John replied. A bunch of questions formed in my head like who is professor clampof? Why are there no students in the hallway and what's special? Regardless my confusion I still went with John for I had nothing better to do. As we neared the end of the hallway there was a door labeled

PROFFESOR
CLAMPOF
GENORISIM TEACHER

I was about to ask what a genorism teacher is, but before I got the chance to ask a tall man around 6.5 feet came out of the door to the classroom. “John how much times have I told you don't be late, how do you even manage to be late with the god damn speed of yours.” As the the professor was turning back to head into the classroom his eyes met mine. “OOh a new student!, How wonderful! Time to check if you're qualified to be in the special government education of genorism program.” “Ellie, Sally get the radiagenorosis machine Dan hook him up” A buff dark skinned boy walked up to me and said “there's no use protesting we'll get youon the machine anyways in the end so just come easy” “everyone in the school has been tested for special powers radiation has caused” “It won't hurt a bit” the way he was biting his lip clearly meant he was lying and those wires definitely looked like they were going to be hooked up to my head and as far as I knew these people around me were some of those special cases whith special powers which in the worst case scenario would all turn against me. I told myself that th longer I stand here the more professor clamp would suspect me of having secrets so I walked up to the machine an allowed Dan to hook me up. By time he was finished my head had about nine wires sticking out o it and I was not happy when professor clamp gave Ellie the privet age to turn the knob on the machine to 100 volts. Clearly I must have blacked cause when I came to my head was free of wires. Professor clamp and his small class of students were all standing above me probably because they set me down on the floor. “congratulations” professor clamp exclaimed “your ability may be considered class D but as long as you got something you're qualified to be in the class.” My feeling of confusion clearly must have shown on my face for profesor clamp looked at me with a puzzled expression. “Is something wrong” he asked, i was about to start asking questions when profesor clamp started his introduction lecture. “ hundreds of years ago many of earths scientists predicted that the sun was going to blow up and a new sun will be born but all the planets around the sun would be incicirated. The scientists under governmental
Persuasion started building these
To the government, the H.E.L.P.E.R.S. are:

Humanoids (that are)
Evolved (and)
Liable
Protectors (who which are)
Efficient (,)
Resourceful (and)
Successful

However to Calix’s father, they are:

Horrible
Elephant
Like
Pyros
Enrolled to
Recreate the
Sun

Each letters stand for a trait. Lol benson you liky

Ivy (very skilled in knife combat, her ability is to change the position of something with the position of something else)

Gorenoch

Liya is now Ivy

Outline:

Character introduction
Transitions
Action
Romance

Battle Scene: (HELPER (special) vs. Calix) (well, the beginning of it)

As soon as class was dismissed, Calix walked away before any of his friends could greet him. He went into a long narrow alley and kept walking until he was almost at the end. He swirled around and fired at the barrel that was exactly 20 meters away and 3.5 foot to the right, the only place in the alley where it could potentially hide a stalker or a spy. The second the bullet hit the barrel, the barrel exploded and a small humanoid shaped creature dodged the barrel’s explosion.

“Hmph, how long have you realized I was spying on you?”, said the creature

“The moment I realized when the papers on my desk were a few millimeters off, a person or an object having an extra shadow which it was not supposed to have, and when I realized when I noticed a door open about half a millimeter when i was sure i closed it completely.” said Calix

“Hmph, I underestimated you, no wonder your class D ability was considered class S”

“And now that I have found, I shall catch and interrogate you”

“Hmph, not in a million years sucker”

Then the creature ran and disappeared into impossibly small shadows. It was noon and the creature was able to hide in the shadows! Then, from the corner of his eye, Calix saw a blade glinting in the sunlight and pivoted just in time before the blade hit his vitals...

*Also worked with my best friend from middle school (he's the best)