The Brokenhearted Hearted Writing Contest-8,500 miles apart !

in #brokenheartedcontest7 years ago

Here's my entry for @tpkidkai's writing contest..
It started like this:
Two different people find each other through social media site..
Two lonely people that 8500 miles away met their way.. And it was all started by sending private message...
The girl received a pm from the boy saying:
Hey there!I am "stating his name")..I just wana say hi..I am looking at your pictures and yOu are so pretty.. I bet you have a lot of suitors..with a smiling sticker..
The girl received his message and didn't able to reply right away because she was at work..
And she finally reply on him saying :
Hi how are you doing! (With a smiley face) thank you for that.. And your right! there are suitors but no one yet caught my heart.. 😁😁
And he replied right away..and then that's the begining of the conversation..
And they began talking in the phone almost everyday.. Video call ..messages
They began having a close relationship
Happy talking to each other
And the boy was giving surprises to the girl
He's buying things online that he taught can make her happy..
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And he made her happy.
They are both happy of what they have.
And time passed by so fast.. And they were became bestfriends.. Telling everything to each other..
The boy playing guitar for the girl and sending their favorite songs to each other..No secrets no lies.. After a year and a half of being bestfriends
the girl texted him :I think I'm falling in love with you..
And 1 hour 1day 2days passed by she didn't get any reply from him..
The girl was worried to death.. What had happened to him?. She tried calling him again and again.received_1675489685798029.jpeg
After 3 days the the girl finally got a message from him saying:
I am very sorry I got sick😷and about your last message to me.. Let's just be friends..I'm happy with what we have.. I can't be with you I am 8500 miles away from you.. And I can't even afford to visit you.. I am waiting for my settlement money.. That's the only hope I have but that is 50/50..
You don't need me.. Find a man that can afford to be with you and marry you.. 😔
But the girl knew that he care for her.. And she knew they love each other.. So she didn't give up..
She kept on messaging him trying to save the friendship they built together but also hoping that he will change his mind..
The girl said: I am willing to wait for you until you can!
But the boy keep on saying nooo. He always tell her she can do a lot more better..
Don't wait for me...
And time passed by.. 2 years.. She's still waiting.. And the boy kept on pushing her away..
The girl was so hopeful because she knew there is something to hold on for..
She cried everynight and prayed hard about him.. After 2 years and a half months her heart became tired and she thinks she need to move on.
And she texted him saying. She will move on.. Take care of yourself.. Thanking him for everything..
Texting him while crying.
And she got no reply..
Months passed by
The girl met the man the he needs..
The man the can afford to be with her and marry her.
And got engaged..
One Sunday morning the girl got a message form the boy saying:congratulations!
That's it. And she told him.. She's getting married
And no reply again.
Until the wedding day came.. And the honeymoon.
And the girl got a message again from the boy.saying :
I'm so sorry I should have asked you to wait for me.. I already have the money now and I can afford now to see You and even marry you.. With a crying face.. I am so hurt right now. I just wish I got that gots to say I love you too. And I'm so jealous. you are supposed to be mine.. If only I could go back 6 months from now.. And if only I received my money earlier.. I'm sure you are mine now. But I am too late.. 😢😢
I am so stupid I lost the woman I ever dream of.. The woman that taught me how to fall in love again... I feel sorry for myself.. I hope he will make you happy for the rest of your life.. 😔
He is so blessed to have you..
And the girl replied on him just saying:thank you ☺but she was thinking "if only You could just say that before I met my husband " maybe I am yours now.. The girl love her husband now and trying to love him with all her heart..
that's the end of their story..

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Wow sis.. true to life story? 😁

It's a true story sis @zhayie03

Feelings of a LDR :(

It hurts@marylizacaindoy.. 😖

That was so sad..🤕

Indeed @triggerlove2009...but at least the girl decided just to let it go and open a new chapter of her life with the man that will love her for the rest of thier life..

awww Jhen that was one sad story.

It is @maverickinvictus... Until now the boy can't move on.. And still wants to talk to the girl. 😔

Wow...does he still try and contact you even after he knows you're married now?😮

A very emotional and touching story of yours..

Hehe.. Yeah it's a very sad story of the boy @liyah09

Awesome story @jhen.

Thank you for reading @floridagypsy..I'm glad you enjoy it... 😊

Panis! Nice one, @jhen. 😉

Hehe.. 😁thank you @Avon. Grace.. May pinaghugutan.. 😂

what a sad story 😥

Super sad@jezzel90 for the boy.. But not for the girl... 😊

Waaaaah! I didn't know nga may karugtong pa! Oh no. I feel sorry for him. 😭😢