Great analogy and a compelling story.
Unfortunate choice of train for your second (third) picture though. That green train looks remarkably like one of the Southern Rail trains in the UK; the company is currently frequently in the news and despised by many of the commuters living in the South of England due to their poor track record and frequently striking staff...
perhaps a different photo is in order?
On face value, it's a cool picture and probably on a very proportion of the readers will even make the connection.
It's funny in an ironic way - depends what angle you're going for 😊