That was totally unexpected, I don't know if it is the end, it could be, yet it could also be a part of a whole, like a book of small twilight episode things. Totally wonderful read. It could also continue from this part, a couple different directions. personally I feel as if the story is complete. This little bit of the story mind you, I can see a lot of more smaller stories running like I said ala Twilight Zone.
Thank you for your insight. You throw in a few directions I'd not thought of and that's sparked a lot of other directions.
I'm grateful for the feedback and I know I keep saying it, but it really is what keeps my writing fresh (for me at least).
Thank you.