You have a minor misspelling in the following sentence:
Overall, never force anyone when it comes to choosing a career for thier life because a small decision can make or spoil thier lives.It should be their instead of thier.
You have a minor misspelling in the following sentence:
Overall, never force anyone when it comes to choosing a career for thier life because a small decision can make or spoil thier lives.It should be their instead of thier.