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RE: New 50-word challenge prompt, writing tips, and story highlights

in #challenge6 years ago

Hi, here's my Entry: https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@ahmadmanga/fiftywords-brain-damage-micro-fiction

If you don't want to view the cover image, read the inspiration begind the story, (and hopefully upvote.) You can read it below:


Brain Damage

We all laughed that day.

It was nothing more than clumsy trip on the stairs.
His smile after the fall told us "It's okay."
No injury was found.

We laughed again.
Foolishly remarked on how forgetful he was since.
Unaware of the silently escalating danger.

Ignorance isn't always a bliss.

[The End]

@jayna, thanks for waiting! I think I did a great job on this, hope you like it. :)

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Great story, @ahmadmanga. I appreciated the backstory too. What a terrible thing.