Thanks to @someone. I just found some typos and grammatical mistakes in English:
- 'flied' should be 'flew'.
- 'a unforgettable trip' should be 'an unforgettable trip'.
I am sorry for my carelessness. I hope that I roughly presented the story in English.
Maybe we can play a game here, named Find a typo or grammatical mistake in this post.
发现投稿了还需要别人帮忙了吧?哈哈。
忘了投稿之后就没法修改了……下回一定多看几眼。不过,让大家玩玩挑语法错误的小游戏也不错。
已改
谢谢!麻烦了!
一人有限制只能投一稿么?