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RE: PAPA-PEPPER : A STAND UP GUY - "EVERYONE CALLS ME 'MEMO'"

in #comedy7 years ago

AH, so there's a difference between narrating a story in a comical way and stand up comedy? It seems that at least some of the stand up I used to watch was comedians narrating stories in comical ways... I'll have to do some research. Thanks for being honest.

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Yes @papa-pepper. The difference is 'punchline'. I think your story was good but you missed the timing of punchline . You should try scripting with strong punches before going real. Cheers!

I actually disagree with that. I think scripting it makes it less organic.

Scripting for the content. It will sound blabbering otherwise.

Tit for tat. Just a Variance of opinion

True. Scripting can lead to static, robotic, depression.
Scripting can disconnect from emotion, connection, true heart.

Yeah, if I wanted that I would watch a news anchor

Not true. To script means to make a content (stronger), write a content- to be able to associate with the audience(s) as you begin a story-telling.