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Here my 1st entry for #comedyopenmic I hope you like the theme
An exemplary family of good working principles, entrepreneurs, led a happy life as a worm
They had a 17-year-old son named Carlos studying rights at a private antioquia university
His father jose had a career as a police officer
His mother, a cupcake housewife, only went to work at home, but he liked to do what he never complained about. He was happy with the life he had
Her husband jose kept guard at night from time to time in his work
Magdalena does not worry because she was part of what he did as an official
But Jose began to go out every night telling his wife that he had to stand guard every day because of the cover to other "Companions of labor"
Magdalena is strange because 20 years of married jose was not used to watch all the night began the doubt and paranolla
Jose went to work one night she hired a taxi
'follow that patrol says to taxi'
After half an hour later the follow-up of destiny went to a brothel
Carlos calls the jíbaro who supplied him with substances of eroinas at 3:00 a.m.
They agreed on the place to abasterce the young man arrives punctually and feels the jibaro cannon that trap tends to tell him Give me the wallet, the clock, and the garment while a patrol passes in the middle of a fight was Father Carlos just look at an alley and observe and did not give importance
While the jibaro shoots him in the chest and leg only the phone manages to find and calls his mother to go to help him
But antender the only thing I hear saying his mother can not and hung him
Jose enters the buldel and asks the best prostitute that there was a blonde of infalto puts her for the fourth test his touch and I start the act
Magdalena enters the bulge and approaches the bar!
And he says to the innkeeper: Young man, I'm looking for an official who has just entered, he does not know where he went?
The innkeeper says: If he is in the rooms above
Magagdalena says: You could tell me the number of the room and give me the key and I will repay you a money for the favor
The innkeeper says: Ok it's okay but I will not tell anyone I do not want to lose my job.
Magadalena goes up and I will have the room aggressively
Then in the same impulse and hatred of being deceived, she pulls a gun and shoots Jose between her eyes
Magdalena went to jail 1 month later she committed suicide I can not stand in her conscience the remorse of not seeing her son help in the moment that was torn between death and to kill Carlos her husband
Nomino: @Elisonr13 and @elpastor
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I am lost here. Is this a joke?
I have more than everything is an anecdote of a prehistory, do not contain most of humor, but if I parcecio a little comic. Thank you have a happy week friend