Greetings community!
Here my entry for the comedy open mic # 41 I hope you like the story
A message of reflection for the parents that we try every day to give the best to their children but most of all to give them attention and attention.
a boy named "Tomas" studied at school and his favorite sport was FUTBOOL
tomas had grandparents living in the countryside in the plains
I had time without seeing them and I missed them enough...
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- he said to the mother
"mother in the holidays I want to go to where my grandparents"
- ok son I will take you in the holidays to where your grandparents
the next day tells him the mdre of tomas very early
you take your stuff ready to take you to where your grandparents
you take happy and full happiness I take your backpack and order your things
4 hours later they arrive at a ravine where the grandparents of takes live
when watching takes the grandparents out to run hugging them and kissing them very happy the smile
of a little boy.
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tomas had cousins named jose and josue they lived there where the grandparents
their cousins are a little wild and helpless and with the visit of shots they also felt excited
they go to juagar futbool they are entertained most of the time
they do everything together, they eat together, they bathed together, cousins
that for the first time they shared wonderful moments of childhood.
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near there lived a pretty girl called (Maria)
the girl went one day to look for a mill
she invited them to go to her house to bathe in the picsina
tomas josue and jose excited went to the pool
and they were having a good time
then they start inventing dangerous games
over the pool hung a tree
and the cousins climbed that tree and threw him down
tomas did not know anything about climbing nor those games
but as every child is naughty and curious
you try to do the same things your cousins did
And he went to climb the tree while climbing
I take a rotten branch and it came down
causing a blow to his head.
'Scared cousins went to call their grandparents'
they took him to the hospital and hour later
The doctor. says relatives of takes
his mother comes out and tells him that he succeeds DR.
""GOOD HIS CHILD SUFFERED A STRONG HIT IN HIS HEAD AND NOW IS IN COMA""
Ardernance: we must be careful with our children and it is to be aware of what they do because they are helpless and do not know anything about life a minute of carelessness can cost them their lives
(This story happened in real events with different characters)
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