https://steemit.com/story/@sanjay2011s/why-the-relationship-fails would love to hear some feed back from you
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Brother i am looking for your feedback. How can i improver . what are the mistakes ? Will you give sometime for it ?please
I did not understand how you could have an anniversary in a relationship, but anyway, the writing need to be improved. Also there is no image source cited.
ok sure . forgot that . will next time.i also dont know about anniversary in relationship. but she was mad at me . will you help me to improve my writing.just mention some websites or topics in grammar or anything else so i can improve myself. thank you