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RE: The Meeting, a story for Constrained Writing contest #11

Ohhh noooeeesssss :o He was naked in a coffee shop and delivered the package to the wrong woman >.<

I love it how you made me feel the anxiety in him though.
And how you made me feel her casual coffee thoughts. So real.

Thank you for your entry! :D

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Close! I was going for that he was schizophrenic or bipolar and just out of touch with reality.

Perhaps I chose the words poorly when I commented, but yeah, that's what I was getting also :P