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RE: Luna Piano And Paris

in #constrainedwriting7 years ago (edited)

I will upvote a newer post of yours so that the upvote doesn't go to waste.

I can tell you went with sad, but you didn't quite make it all that obvious. I expected a bit more descriptive writing about the emotion itself, or something more tied to it, but you're definitely heading in the right direction. Definitely an improvement over your previous entries! :D

Thank you very much for your entry!