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RE: 50 Word Micro-Fiction Competition – Win SBI Shares

in #contest6 years ago

Here is my entry. Good luck to everyone else!


Oblivion

Lily slammed down the photo. George’s ugly face was gone. Air whispered through the open window.

Just one jump and she’d fly. The guilt wouldn’t hurt any more.

“Lily? I’m scared!” Alfie’s voice quivered.

Sighing, she closed the window and went to comfort him. He needed her.

“I’m coming, sweetheart.”

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Thanks so much for your entry! Such a range of emotions in such a short space. Loved it. E x