RE: VDUX Haiku Contest Continues With Beauty -- Conga Optional!

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amayphin (61)in #contest • 6 years ago (edited)

hi again, my entry this week,
Thanks!
not sure if this is right..

Trust Mommy
by @amayphin

Face those bad bullies,
Mom said you are beautiful.
So cry, fight then smile!

6 years ago in #contest by amayphin (61)

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vdux (61) 6 years ago

It's great! Can you change the second line to read "Mom said you are beautiful." -- to make it 7 syllables? Rules!

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