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I really enjoyed reading this story! It is an extremely well written dark thriller that keeps you on the edge of your seat. You are a great writer. I am now following you and look forward to reading more of your posts! :)

I wouldn't describe it better ! Agree in 100% with every word that you wrote. This story should be definitely rewarded this week

To me, it looks like you were describing some Black Axe triggered event, only without black sorcery rituals in it. Well, I learned just recently that that name doesn't represent only a male perfume.