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Welcome, @crypotcatz
Nice poem about life Struggle... we enjoyed it
But it is not a Haiku Unfortunately. Please check.

I agree to disagree 😁
Is it the middle line?

Yes, it is the middle line, fire and wire are just one syllable each. In my next post I will show you the tool that I use to count the syllables. Before I had this tool I would make similar mistakes so don’t worry, better luck in the next competition.

Yeah, I tried several syllable counters and they all give different anwsers, I could not find a solid anwser on "wires" and "fires" being 1 or 2, thanks for the update