Oh my goodness! Your story exposes the wickedness in us all--I could not tell who was the worst "bad guy"! I read somewhere that the true test of art is if it invokes emotion. Not just happiness or pleasantries, but any strong emotion. Nailed it! You'll soon be the next Poe.
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Well thank you very much! I do hope to be a great writer so I'm practicing expressing myself through fiction all the time. :)
A very worthy endeavor. I love stories that take a crazy and unpredictable twist at the end. The element of surprise wins every time. I've dabbled with writing myself, but it just turns out to be a child's scribbling on a hallway wall. Usually with the blue crayon. More power to you!