well at least my bizarre and disorderly history could be put next to great stories, and really as the writer I have to admit that from the beginning to the end of the creation of the story was a mess, from the point of having so many different ideas, to not knowing how to make everything in the 1000 words
and let's see if I can do better this time
oh, I know what you mean! I always have trouble keeping it short, too! I end up writing and writing and just being beaten by the whole thing more often than not. But I really enjoyed your story and I can't wait to see what this one inspires in you ;)