This was my first post on Steemit. I'm rather proud of the poetry and the picture is original.https://steemit.com/poetry/@emptyintentions/deeper
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This was my first post on Steemit. I'm rather proud of the poetry and the picture is original.https://steemit.com/poetry/@emptyintentions/deeper
Interesting contrast between the words and the picture, but I get it and it is strikingly magnificent. This piece struck my spirit in a perculiar yet familiar way., because It forced me to remember seasons of pain and the different things I did to deaden the pain. It made me remember worlds I lived in that now I am far removed from and if the space, the invisible divide between now and then is an illusion then the question that so hauntingly lingers is how far away from that time of dysfunction am I really? And on another note I celebrate all my journeys because I grew a great deal from the pain and with that growth came wisdom. Thank you for sharing this raw and honest body of work. There should be a reboot 2.0 version to this. And I only suggest this because as it was for me this piece of work can be medicine to the many in the shadows looking for someone with whom they can relate and that are screaming by their very presence "Do You See Me?"
Thank you very much @rensoul17, I really appreciate your lovely words! Your take on my poem is exactly why I made it and how I felt. If I make a 2.0 version I may want to make a song out of it.
I agree with this sentiment @emptyintentions , @rensoul17 basically said it all. Looking forward to 2.0