picking scum from under a fingernail with the edge of a hymn pamphlet.
Ew. I guess there is something satisfying about taking out scum.
That was a fun set up. Not sure I can give literary criticism though, I don't think I'm well read enough. Ol Maddock sure seems in a cushy spot with no motivation to fight any...thing...
Thanks Eon
I'm gonna write another post on how to critique fiction. Not asking you to work outside your comfort zone. That's like you asking me to do maths aaarrrggghhh :D
Cheers
Anj x