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RE: Win 1.5 SBDs in VDux's Adolescent Haiku Contest About Teenagers

in #contest6 years ago (edited)

and because it's so much fun, here another one:

Think only that tongues kiss
like a hummingbirds fluttering wings
what a juvenile innocent error


HaHa! What a great picture pick, those dancing boys are hilarious!

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Ha, yes, funny gif. Can you make this into a haiku, too? Traditional haiku with 5 syllables in the first line, 7 syllables in the second line, and 5 syllables in the third line.