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That's a bummer. This took me whole evening. Well! Maybe I'll post the whole thing in my blog see if it grabs an eye or two.

I know it's a bummer.. it's understandable that you took time. Unfortunately there was the deadline.. You may partecipate to this new one and - if this is your quality of writing - I'll make sure to reward you. Sure thing you can publish it with my part too, just quote me as the author of part 1 ✌️

Certainly.

However this was brilliant, especially the ending.. at the point I regret I didn't think to this myself lol..did you get a curie vote so far for your works?

Not really. I write poems mostly.