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Welcome, @gilmored
Yes Haiku are fun to write 🤓... and a pleasure to read. Like this one.
Good Luck

Thank you, lots of good entries, I could use the luck haha.

@moonleesteem Your comma is a word too soon, I think?

Not being the grammer police; I know I could use a few lessons, but I caught it (after about the 10th time) so I figured I'd point it out.

If you see me make mistakes, please, point them out. I would like to improve my grammer.

Love what you're doing, and I'm happy to see such a strong poetry presence on steemit!

Oh I done that because I use Grammarly, the grammar app and I don’t know why it suggested this but thanks for noticing. It proves we are still smarter than robots.

By the way you poem is not a Haiku. You are missing one syllable in the last line. But don’t worry, I will show you the tool I use to correct my Haikus in the next post.

Well darn, you got me. I thought they're was two syllables. I will use a syllable counter from now on, thank you for pointing that out :)