Sigh... Not sure which story to submit. I like this one mostly because of the twist: Here she goes titled "Unwelcome Guests"
Olivia wasn’t expecting company and the floor creaked and cracked as she peered through the peephole. Absolutely mortified by the most horrific sight, she desperately tried to stay calm; then, she heard the shrill sound of her mother in law’s voice, “open up, I know you’re in there!”
Lol thanks for your comically horrorifying entry, I do know some people have had some pretty bad experiences with their mother in laws so I see it from both ends. Thank god my mother in law is a very kind lady, more than tolerable :)
Ya of course! Some are great some are terrible for sure. I tried to capture the horror of having to deal with one you dislike unexpectedly. There was this whole other half, where Olivia slips over the banister while trying to make a break for the back door and accidentally hangs herself on a theraband... It seemed like it was a little much tho so left it out.
haha, yeah that does seem a bit over the top, but honestly bro, I am so clumsy, it could happen to me if I rush, I recently did something very stupid and painful, but I'll maybe post that later on. lol
haha, we all have our moments.
I seem to have more than many :)