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RE: STACH Short Story Contest #30: 199 words, 5 winners, 15SB prize pool!

in #contest7 years ago

The country of wonders of nightclubs

Pedro was a very shy young man, he had never had a girlfriend. I always dreamed of visiting a Night Club for men where women danced with little clothes. One day while talking with his friends at the university, the theme of the nightclubs came up, each one explained his experiences, but when the time for Pedro arrived, he remained silent, all worried they asked him if he did not know any. The very sorry told them no, that had been his great desire but shyness had not visited.
Jorque as it was the most picaron told him to enlist that the next day they were going to take him. The next day Pedro put on his best suit and went with his friends to a new Club. Pedro was happy because his dream was going to be a reality, his friends talked with the owner of the place so that two girls would dance him and take him to bed.
Once everything happened, the friends asked Pedro how his experience had been and he told them that he had entered the country of wonders. From that day every weekend visited him.