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RE: New Contest from @Xpilar 7/11-2017 "get free upvote"

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In a very large house, there lived three brothers. Helen, Adzwa, and Farel are three orphaned brothers who live together since adzwa 2 years old. They are now endowed with Helen's work as a painter. Farrel and Adzwa who are still attending MTsN Jakarta.

Today Farrel and Adzwa to school in between Helen by car. Farrel and Adzwa studied earnestly, now Farrel sat in class IX MTs while Adzwa in class VII MTs. Today Farrel and Adzwa came home at 5:00 am because of an additional class of English after the last hour. They came home with TAXI to the house.
Upon arriving at Helen's house have prepared a meal for this afternoon. They eat together with jokes and laughter even though their parents are gone.

Now the time is 6am, they perform the maghrib prayers in congregation. After performing the maghrib prayer service, Farrel and Adzwa did the tasks the teacher gave this afternoon, while Helen finished her painting.
When they are doing their respective duties. Right behind the house is an old warehouse, sound like the fall of a collection of glass plates that sound was heard up to 7 times in a row behind their house.

Then the three of them look into the warehouse and investigate what is going on there. Then they saw a very large cabinet that might have been 4 meters from the floor. Right in front of the closet was seen a number of broken glass plate scattered. Then Farrel tries to open the cabinet and, "Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa"

"Where are we again?" Adzwa asked with fear. "Looks like we're in the forest again, but this forest is very beautiful and the smell of roses there is very stinging to the nose, it's like my sister do not want to go home" said Helen mocking Adzwa's sweet sister. "Ihh ... my brother is serious again nih, do not joke keep me afraid here let alone this forest!" Adzwa still continue to fear and hold his brother's hand. "Adek sister fear? Are you already a teenager afraid of hell? "Helen persuaded her cowardly sister.

After a long time they went through the forest they saw a very clear river, and it turns out there is also a bridge formed from a set of white clouds above it.
"Waahhh ... this bridge is beautiful! kayak in heaven. Did I dream? "Farrel said, pinching his arm. "Auuw ... it turns out I'm no longer a dream!" Farrel yelled at his painful pinch. "Farrel, it's not a dream, we're going back to that big cabinet!" Helen replied as she pinched her imaginary younger cheeks .

Then they climbed a very long bridge, then they saw a very grand palace and the palace was formed from the arrangement of ice blocks are neatly arranged. Also next to the palace stuck an ice board that has been carved and inscribed "Frederiksborg Palace". And that is the name of a great and majestic palace right before their eyes. "Subhanallah ... is this evidence of God's power?" Helen greatly admired the palace, because she had never seen the palace before.

They entered the palace through an open door of ice by itself. In front of the door was already seen a clear ice staircase like glass. Waahhh ... this palace is very beautiful, we ride yuk! Helen took her siblings up the ice steps. "Ayoo!" Farrel and Adzwa answered in unison.

After a long time they went around the palace. Suddenly out someone from the top floor. "Heyy .. !!! who are you guys? Do not expect you'll get a crystal moon "a man who does not know who they are talking to the three brothers. "Wait! What do you mean? Emangnya us thieves, do not direct the nuduh yes if there is no proof "Helen immediately angry for being accused of being a thief. "Then if it's not a thief why can you get here?" The man asked in a puzzled tone. "We were stuck in the wardrobe in the shed behind our house, for some reason we got here" Helen replied in an annoyed tone. "Oohhh ... so you're lost, sorry for being angry with you guys. Oh just introduce me Justin, I'm a prince then what are your names? "Justin apologizes for having been guilty and then asked them. "I'm Helen, this is my Adek's name is Farrel and my adek is Adzwa." Helen replied that she was not upset about Justin. "Temenan yuk! Do not be angry, it's just a misunderstanding "Justin invites utuk friends with Helen, Farrel, and Adzwa. "Okay! we are temenan "Adzwa responded with joy.

After that they became friends and became friends. "Oh yes please go in, for a while you can stay here, you can stay in this room and you can change your clothes in the locker room, later if you need anything you can ask the waiter here." " But we do not bother you? "Helen replied in a dismissive voice. "No, you do not ngerepotin anyone. Instead I am more pleased with your arrival "Justin replied by praising them.

Two days later, they would go for a walk not far from the frederiksborg palace. When going out of the palace suddenly there are arrows flying towards them. "Aaahhh ..." they screamed in terror. "Thank you! Already nyelamatin we Just "Helen berrima love for having saved Justin. "Yes it is" Justin answered Helen's thanks while holding the arrow that had been tied with a letter. Then Justin read the contents of the letter, in the letter that read "I AM OF THE BRAIN KINGDOM OF CHANGING YOU TO RIGHT A LONG BEEN BEING IN MY ISTANAM". The letter was given by the Braktislaga kingdom against the kingdom of Frederiksborg aimed at obtaining the moon crystals.

After receiving the letter they canceled to go to the park, and made a strategy to try to defeat the royal forces of Braktislaga. "Then what are we going to do to defeat them?" Helen was very anxious and sweaty as her fear mounted. "Oh yes I know the way it is, first we will fight with the opponent that is in front of us, then we take out the second sword and jab it to the opponent who is behind or beside us then our enemies will quickly decrease, do you all agree? "Farrel gave the idea to fight the Braktislaga kingdom to make it all clear. "Agreed !!!" they agreed with Farrel's idea and cheered while drinking warm tea that was almost cold.

While they were chatting, it turned out that one of Braktislaga's palace guards knew of the frederiksborg royal plan and set up a strategy that was very much against their plan. Then the guard told the King to arrange a more powerful strategy than the frederiksborg royal army strategy.

The following day came the battle between the Frederiksborg kingdom and the Braktislaga kingdom. In the battle of Adzwa hit by a very hard blow and his legs can not be moved, when Adzwa conditions are not good that's the enemy began to kill him. But Adzwa was saved by Helen, and Helen was the one who was hit, then in the middle of the fight Helen fainted. Then Adzwa shouted crying "kakak do not leave me kak !!!" Adzwa not stop crying.

Then the royal forces of Braktislaga fled from the battle, then Justin unleashed the moon crystals to destroy them and finally all the royal forces of Braktislaga disappeared like ashes.

At that time they took Helen into the palace to be treated. But the drugs were not effective for treating Helen's wound, then they sought a solution to it. "I'll try with the moon crystals, maybe it can heal Helen" Justin mencobadengan strength of the moon crystal. It turned out that the moon crystals could be used to treat Helen's wounds.
"Thank God you're aware of Helen, we were very worried about your dying situation" Justin worried about his best friend. "Why do my sisters have to nolongin me? My sister is so wretched! "Adzwa is angry with Helen's act of help. "Yes you can not kill their sister, they want to die soon?" Helen said with a laugh. "Sister again sick but still joking as well" Adzwa more angry and hit his sister's hands then went out with an upset heart.

"Justin, I think I've got to go home, because my house is not how many days no longer wire" Helen began to worry about his house. "Just calm down, you have not recovered do not think about going home first!" Justin tried to calm Helen who wanted to go home quickly.

The next day Helen was very well recovered. They intend to go home. "Sister with what we go home? we will go in the closet and get there in the forest there is no hole or anything visible there! then how do we go home? "Farrel scratched his head in confusion. "You do not worry, you can all go home, you have to go into the river and you will find a way out" Justin shows the river on which the cloud bridge.

Then they went to the river and said goodbye to their friend Justin. When they jumped into the river, they had reached the cabinets in the warehouse. After they get out of the cupboard in their hands have been installed crystal-shaped bracelets moon that they will not forget. Then they come home with a story. And they lived happily ever after.

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nice @jroh

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"Frederiksborg Palace" liked your story about it @jroh