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The Haunted Island.

Once upon a time there was a very beautiful Island. By the beach, there was a very beautiful and big Royal palace older than 200 years old.
Nobody used to come and go by this Island because people believed that there were very powerful ghosts living inside and around the palace.
There was a very popular story about this Island and Palace. Long long ago this Island was Ruled by a very powerful King called Bhasmey. He was so powerful physically and supernaturally that nobody could stand him in a battlefield.Day by day he be became more popular and popular around the world due to his fighting skills and powers.
There was also a very Powerful witch ruling a Big country called Nadigama. She also heard many rumors about this Brave and Powerful King Bhasmey.
One day The witch came to meet the king Bhasmey and offer him to marry with her and rule the world together with their powers.She also threatened to accept the offer or lose his life and people.
But the kind immediately rejected her offer without thinking for a second time saying that he wouldn't marry with a bad witch and lose all his respect for his beloved people.
The angry witch then cursed the King and his whole Island with her black powers and left. And from that day the unrested souls of The king and all people from that Island were roaming there as ghosts.

That is why nobody ever goes there again.


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Once upon a time there was a very beautiful Island. By the beach, there was a very beautiful and big Royal palace older than 200 years old.
Nobody used to come and go by this Island because people believed that there were very powerful ghosts living inside and around the palace.
There was a very popular story about this Island and Palace. Long long ago this Island was Ruled by a very powerful King called Bhasmey. He was so powerful physically and supernaturally that nobody could stand him in a battlefield.Day by day he be became more popular and popular around the world due to his fighting skills and powers.
There was also a very Powerful witch ruling a Big country called Nadigama. She also heard many rumors about this Brave and Powerful King Bhasmey.
One day The witch came to meet the king Bhasmey and offer him to marry with her and rule the world together with their powers.She also threatened to accept the offer or lose his life and people.
But the kind immediately rejected her offer without thinking for a second time saying that he wouldn't marry with a bad witch and lose all his respect for his beloved people.
The angry witch then cursed the King and his whole Island with her black powers and left. And from that day the unrested souls of The king and all people from that Island were roaming there as ghosts.

What a good story. The power king got a cursed from the witch.

nice one.

Game of thrones director?)

:) :)

good entry :)

Thank you for your story, you get a good upvote @mukhtar.juned

Thanks @xpilar 😊

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like the glasses

are you healthy @xpilar

you are up, hehehe @xpilar

hahahah

The broken heart of an angry witch caused the king and his people being cursed. What a lobe story. Nice.

what a love story..

Thanks for kind words @redrose

nice one. Wanna be powerful like King Bhasmey. thanks for sharing

lol,, nice idea.

Thanks, hehe but be aware of that witch. Good luck.:)

You are welcome buddy

nice story, I like it.

thanks much :)

You are welcome..

wow, you have good talent in writing story @katteasis!

I gave it a try @saini88. thanks for sweet words.:)

great story :)

Thanks friend

u are welcome

Good story , like @katteasis

I'm glad you liked it. thank you @sultan-aceh

sweet story.....

thanks a lot friend @masummim50

very good story @katteasis, i like it

Good story @katteasis 100% upvote

Thank you @xpilar. Means a Lot :)

I love this story a lot!! What a creative person you are.😄