RE: STEEMIT HAIKU CONTEST # WEEK 14: (Original Contest)

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maane (50)in #contest • 7 years ago (edited)

Here's my first entry😊

The driftwood

I am lost like driftwood
Along sea shores how i will be
Need you to find me

7 years ago in #contest by maane (50)

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moonleesteem (59) 7 years ago

This is a very good first try, we enjoyed it... but
Unfortunately it’s has to many syllables.
Please check...Welcome, @maane

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maane (50) 7 years ago

5-7-5 just edited @moonleesteem thank you for informing

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moonleesteem (59) 7 years ago

🤓

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