It surprised me in the direction it took, but not so much in an original way. Honestly it seemed a bit forced, but I suppose that can happen when you're under a deadline...it's certainly happened to me. I'm still looking forward to the next stories though.
I didn't mean to hurt your feelings. Maybe it's just my reading of the piece. I certainly couldn't do what you're doing in writing a story every day. It's kinda like Harlan Ellison isn't it?
Well that's good. It was the "wow" at the beginning of the statement. 30 minutes for that? I have to say "Wow". Looking forward to the next installment in this series.
It surprised me in the direction it took, but not so much in an original way. Honestly it seemed a bit forced, but I suppose that can happen when you're under a deadline...it's certainly happened to me. I'm still looking forward to the next stories though.
Wow, okay, well thanks for the honest feedback.
I didn't mean to hurt your feelings. Maybe it's just my reading of the piece. I certainly couldn't do what you're doing in writing a story every day. It's kinda like Harlan Ellison isn't it?
LOL no i was serious you gave honest feedback. No hurt feelings i wrote that piece in thirty minutes. I think expanded it wouldn't feel so rushed
Well that's good. It was the "wow" at the beginning of the statement. 30 minutes for that? I have to say "Wow". Looking forward to the next installment in this series.
Just read the story too...., and i really loved the way it went...,
I guess we all just have what we look forward to in a piece...,
Nonetheless @markrmorrisjr We are looking forward to more stories from you