RE: New Contest! 2 SBDs, Author Rewards and More - If you can write 17 syllables!

[melissakellie]

Garden grew beautiful flowers
Couldn't give any more hours
now weeds only remain

Comments

[vdux]

Thanks for the entry! Can you make this a traditional 5-7-5 haiku like the ones described here: http://www.kidzone.ws/poetry/haiku.htm?

Also, I listened to you sing. You have a beautiful voice!