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RE: 50 Word Micro-Fiction Competition – Win SBI Shares

in #contest6 years ago

Here's my entry in blog form:

https://steemit.com/life/@oivas/a-new-perspective

And reproducing here:

The open ocean, the seagulls, the cool breeze, the saline fragrance, and the invisible horizon was lost fifteen years back to a man-made concrete obstruction.

The concrete blind was never stable and today it will be razed to the ground.

An old view with a new perspective awaits! Hallelujah!!

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Ooh fabulous- I really like this fresh take on the prompt and that feeling of excited hope. Your story takes us flying out of the little room. Thanks so much for your entry! E x