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Haha.... At least there was a point that I was leading the pack! Thanks for the generous tip. :)

PS - the third requirement states this:

The poem must rhyme in some way.

Not sure if yours would qualify...FYI
You've got a week to tweak it though.

I saw that and mine did rhyme, in my head. But upon reading it again I realize that it needs more than tweaking. I'll get right on it and thank you for the heads up.

NO problem!