Hmm, this was quite an interesting approach. I get that there is a story, which already is hard to tell in 150-words exactly, but there's more than just a story. There is a lot of emotion. "disbelief weight like an anchor" - that was a heck of a great phrase! I see I have got tough competition ;)
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Yeah I have been seeing you a lot. Glad to be a quill companion