RE: Enter VDux's Happy Haiku Contest and Win 1.5 SBDs

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redheadpei (71)in #contest • 6 years ago (edited)

Happy Haiku time! U&R

Put a smile on
Ride the waves of happiness
Joy is soon fleeting!
My link:
https://steemit.com/esteem/@redheadpei/haiku-time-again-e5b6328fc3429

6 years ago in #contest by redheadpei (71)

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vdux (61) 6 years ago

Thank you! I agree. Can you change the last line to 5 syllables?

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redheadpei (71) 6 years ago

Yes. I guess I thought fleeting was flee -t- ing. 😂

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crescendoofpeace (64) 6 years ago

The first line has only four syllables.
Nicely done, in any case. ;-)

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