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RE: STACH Short Story Contest #10: 199 words-10SBD prize pool!

in #contest7 years ago (edited)

Sweets for Susanna

Pedrito is a ten-year-old boy and is playing at recess when he stumbles over someone who makes him fall, from the ground he saw a beautiful girl holding out his hand to help him get up, "excuse me, I did not see you coming" the girl said with a smile on her pink lips, she was Susanna, the new sixth grade student, she asked if he was okay but he could not speak as he looked at Susanna's face and her beautiful blue eyes that seemed to flash lights whenever she blinked with its long lashes. The girl left leaving Pedrito fully enchanted, he had fallen in love for the first time.

The next day at school he anxiously waited for recess and spent all of his allowance on sweets, he looked for Susanna and saw her with another boy, Pedrito burst out in jealousy and started to walk towards them, but a boy clashed with him throwing it to the ground along with all the sweets, Susanna approached Pedrito who stretched his arm, but the girl took several sweets from the ground, turned her back to him and went with her friend laughing at Pedrito.