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RE: Enter VDux's Happy Haiku Contest and Win 1.5 SBDs

in #contest • 6 years ago

I want to understand
some more about the Haiku
I will be happy

Ok. I am not good in English, but it's a great practice to move the memory looking for words.

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     6 years ago  

    Welcome! That's a great start. Kudos to you!!!

    The only correction: your first line is six syllables, it needs to be five. Can you revise?

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       6 years ago (edited) 

      Yes, I do. I like this game!

      It's great understand
      some more about the Haiku
      I am so happy

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       6 years ago  

      Ha! Lovely.

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