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RE: Weekly 50-word short story contest + last week's winner

in #contest6 years ago

{Bit late to the party, sowry.}

- A gifting moment -

"Saddie!~"

"Comin' my Ashuri~"

"Come a lil' closer, Saddie."

"Ashuri, what's it-"

"Surprise!"

"Oj mój Bóg!"

"Try it out, my Saddie~"

"It fits perfectly~"

"Wonderful."

"Hey, turn around~"

"He he he, okay Saddie."

"Now turn around~"

"Hmm?~"

"Open it up."

"Huh! How can I ever-"

"A kiss maybe?~"

"For you!~"

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Aww, this is sweet, @theironfelix. What is it that she tries on?

UwU ~ Thanks for reading and thanks for the compliments! Well they’re both shes, so I guess I’ll answer it for both their cases; regardless, I answer this q without it really changing a thing of the story (since I did left it in the reader’s head to imagine what both could’ve received). I imagined Saddie would’ve received a new (Polish) headscarf while Ashuri a new red dress. But truly, since I haven’t inked it down here, these two items shouldn’t change a thing within the dialogue. Only give mere hints of a focus; for if one hasn’t written it down, it is implied or truly unstated. Then again, this is what happens when yah come from the philosophical tradition and enter into everything else that indirectly reflects a type of philosophy.

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