RE: The 1111 Writing Contest - What magic can you create with only 1111 characters?! - Week 3 - 'Change' [TOP PRIZE 3 STEEM + Runner up Prizes!! Winners from Week 2 Announced!]
I read it a few times. Firstly - I love the flow of it, the use of language, the way it takes you from one place to the next. However - I really wish I knew what it was about. As you'll know from my writings - they are all usually pretty straight forward and easy to understand - am I being stupid and it's blatantly obvious what its all about... or am I just not looking hard enough!
Would love you to shine some light on it for me, my eye-sight isn't so good ;)
I deliberately wrote it so that it breaks open hidden stuff in the reader. What causes the " Change" will be different for every person reading it ...that was the whole purpose LOL ...now you made me reveal it ;) but basically what it is is change itself ...
Really enjoyed reading this, it raised a lot of questions in my head...
...I started to wish the constraint was 11111 characters so i could find out more.
Cool piece :)
:D
I got pre-apocalyptic vibes . Quite a thrilling theme.
Hey! Thank you so much for another entry.
I read it a few times. Firstly - I love the flow of it, the use of language, the way it takes you from one place to the next. However - I really wish I knew what it was about. As you'll know from my writings - they are all usually pretty straight forward and easy to understand - am I being stupid and it's blatantly obvious what its all about... or am I just not looking hard enough!
Would love you to shine some light on it for me, my eye-sight isn't so good ;)
Thank you once again!
With Love
Hart Floe Poet
♥
I deliberately wrote it so that it breaks open hidden stuff in the reader. What causes the " Change" will be different for every person reading it ...that was the whole purpose LOL ...now you made me reveal it ;) but basically what it is is change itself ...