Thank you! I love that you used a picture. Can you revise to fit the traditional 5-7-5 format?
Like the ones described here: http://www.kidzone.ws/poetry/haiku.htm .
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Thank you! I love that you used a picture. Can you revise to fit the traditional 5-7-5 format?
Like the ones described here: http://www.kidzone.ws/poetry/haiku.htm .
The haiku has been revised.
Thanks for bringing this to my knowledge.
I neglected checking the syllable structure of adorned, when I was writing it.
Still six syllables in the first line...
(Stickler? Maybe...I use the traditional haiku format so all contestants have the same rules/restrictions)
The final revision had been done.
This contest had taught me the importance of checking my words before publishing.
Thanks a lot.
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Thank you for your haiku! Here's the winner announcement: https://steemit.com/contest/@vdux/2bwufc-vdux-haiku-contest-winners
Congratulations to all the winners.
I can't wait for the next round.
Stay tuned!